Lesson pitch and feedback

Today we presented our ideas to the class explaining our music video, our band and target audience. This was a chance for us to recieve feedback and ways in which we can improve our band to ensure we have the best possible outcome. Some of the feedback we recieved was mainly on our target audience, as the class felt they were a little to old and we should make them younger. They also thought we should remove our secondary audience which I will be explaining in a future post once the target audience is changed.